
by anemix
1 comment
MMeye said 1 year ago:
Beautiful !
One detail however, I think the white zone at the top and on the left is disturbing, against the warm mood of the image. Maybe you could just have cropped a bit.

by sgresnic
6 comments
sgresnic (Sandy) said 1 year ago:
Thanks... Actually, the flowers & plants are the original color (maybe a tiny bit enhanced). The contrast is because I made the upper part of the image black & white to make the contrast even greater and to make the flowers "pop." I wasn't sure how successful this was - so I'll take that as one "no" vote. :)
Lea (Lea Mulqueen) added a critique 1 year ago:
To me, the combination color/monochrome doesn't work in this image. The sweeper is an important part of the story but becomes a shadowey figure. I think this image would be much more effective as a color image...or even a monochrome image, but the combination is confusing to the eye...(my eyes, anyway ;-) )
sgresnic (Sandy) said 1 year ago:
Thanks! That's helpful. hmmm.... I'm still getting to know the site. Can I upload the full color version to get a comparison, or is that not allowed? Maybe I'll upload it and see what happens.
warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 1 year ago:
when i scrolled down, my screen stopped at the bottom edge of that front table, leaving out the flowers at the bottom...made for a very nice effect with only the one flower in view--perhaps try cropping out some of the bottom? for this theme anyway--not sure if that would work for anything else
raphshap added a critique 1 year ago:
i like the picture a lot. i would crop out the...fire alarm, i guess it is? those lights above the door frame of the sweeper

by juanantonio
6 comments
juanantonio (J.A. Pellicer) said 1 year ago:
gracias por su comentario, augusto
Pixim (Eric) said 1 year ago:
Encuentro la idea original, y bien puesta en valor por la composición. Como dice Augusto, volvemos a entrar de buen grado en el deseo de ver. Daño que el tratamiento demasiado avanzado aplane el fondo, sobre todo el cielo (en cualquier caso sobre mi pantalla). La chromie utilizada es interesante. A la próxima.
juanantonio (J.A. Pellicer) said 1 year ago:
Agradezco tu sinceridad y comparto contigo que quizá me he excedido en el tratamiento de fondo. Seguimos aprendiendo. Gracias y saludos.
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) said 1 year ago:
Estando de acuerdo con los comentarios anteriores, me gusta la toma y la posición de los elementos. Saludos
juanantonio (J.A. Pellicer) said 1 year ago:
Gracias por su comentario

by kazik
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by Heath
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by JustNolan
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byutanner (Jason Tanner) said 1 year ago:
well done. I like how although the subject is relatively small it still really grabs your attention.

by Morrra
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by philippe
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by w3nsch1
1 comment
Wonderful capture. Lovely photo.