Uploaded by lucdlb - 5 comments - Topic: Portrait of a Person (1 year ago)
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msdedi (Linda) said 1 year ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:
This is quite nice. I really like the framing/cropping. On my monitor there is no detail in the iris and pupil of the eyes, all black. I would like to see just a little detail there. It's hard to know, no 2 monitors seems to be exactly the same.
The white background really pulls you right to her face and creates a interesting contrast to the subtle provocative nature of her look.
Good work!
aloha_photo (Jeff Sisemoore) added a critique 1 year ago:
It might be your monitor, Beamer. There is some detail and separation of her iris and pupil that can be seen on my monitor. Nice work, lucdlb. Given the angle of her posture, I would imagine that this shot could be difficult to pull off without creating some perspective problems. But you've done this well.
dcrphotography (Daniel) added a critique 1 year ago:
She seems a bit washed out to me.
Topher (Christopher Mueller) added a critique 1 year ago:
I'd like to see a little less light on her face, and maybe from a different direction. Also would either want to be closer to her face, or see the entire head. Works great as-is; these are personal preferences. Liking the DOF.
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this is beautiful