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Jessa added a critique 11 months ago:

I've been thinking about this picture for awhile now. I like the DOF. I even like the gloomy tonal quality. There are all of these lines leading me through the picture, which in theory is a good thing, but they are leading me to this fuzzy fence. The problem I'm having I guess is that I never really focus on the bench (the subject)Perhaps a different angle .. maybe lower or take a step to the left or right would help this image?

PhotoDaniels (Stephanie Daniels) said 11 months ago:

I definately see what you're talking about. There is something about this image I can't put my finger on myself. That's why I posted it. It just feels incomplete to me. I don't know what it is!! Very frustrating!! LoL :)
Thanks for the advice. I did crop this image so I can try to bring the benches into view more. I do like the lonely little leaf by itself.... but that's about it...I know I'm still missing something with this...

Jessa added a critique 11 months ago:

I hadn't noticed the lone leaf until you mentioned it. I like it too. Maybe if crop to the right of that leaf taking out the bridge and the majority of the water you can bring focus back into the image.

just a thought

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