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Noir (3 months ago)
HuubL added a critique 3 months ago:
soreks (Fedor Soreks) said 3 months ago:
There is a way fortune-telling if one is loved or not by tearing down the petals of the chamomile and saying "loved" and "not loved" in turns; the last petal to be torn gives the answer.
I tried to convey the shaky feeling of being unsure of one's love, hence one chamomile is sharp and half-cut and the other is half-cut and blurred and one half-blurred to symbolize how uncertain one would feel even if the "loved" answer is given by fortune-telling.
HuubL added a critique 3 months ago:
I see ;)
soreks (Fedor Soreks) said 3 months ago:
:)
JBridges (Jim Bridges) added a critique 3 months ago:
With your explanation, I sort of see what you're trying to do here, but I don't think it comes across that well. I think there would be other ways to communicate that idea better. As for this photo, what if you took the same advice you gave the dog photo--go for a square crop, getting rid of most of the left side and putting more emphasis on the flower on the right side.
soreks (Fedor Soreks) said 3 months ago:
To be honest, it does not come across easily even in the culture where the said way of fortune telling is customary :).
I also think getting rid of the left side would be a good idea, thanks Jim, I'll try it!
soreks (Fedor Soreks) said 3 months ago:
Motif: Un peu, beaucoup, passionnément...
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I guess you put the focus on the half flower on purpose, but I wonder why...