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(7 months ago)
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Green
(7 months ago)
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 7 months ago:
Pradeep (Pradeep P) said 7 months ago:
Clyde, the center of the leaf is in focus too, but I guess its texture coupled with the noise I added makes it look unfocused. Also the leaves had a light coating of dust on it.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
Pradeep,
The noise isn't an issue for me, but it really appears just a little too soft in regards to the focus. That having been said, it's a beautiful composition.
Best,
Jon
Pradeep (Pradeep P) said 7 months ago:
Hmm...since both of you agree that the focus is soft, lemme see if I can work on it.
Thanks for the critique guys, really appreciate.
Cheers :)
CouCou33 (Ingrid) added a critique 7 months ago:
I have to agree with Clyde and Jon, the central leave seams a little out of focus to me too. but that said, I really like the composition, the lighting and the dof. the noise is also a very nice touch that gives a little ancient touch to the scene... nicely done :-)
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The rim lighting here is very nice. I wish the leaf was a bit sharper. The center of DoF seems to be on the lower leaf which is farther out than the main leaf.