Uploaded by narnold - 7 comments - Topic: Detail of music (3 months ago)
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warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 3 months ago:
mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 2 months ago:
Very interesting shot.
Nice low angle and awesome subject really fit into this topic. Also really like the toning.
Would not change a thing!
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 2 months ago:
I find this very nice, but still lacking somehow. The subject is great, the lighting is great. I think it may be the composition that bothers me. I think you may have included too much. I just did a scroll bar crop to loose the whole curve space at the left and about half of the dark shape, it seem then to hold more interest for me?? Is this the natural color, or is this a sepia treatment. This might look better as a strong tonal range B&W.
narnold (Noah Arnold) said 2 months ago:
Amy and Mike: Thanks!!
Beamer: I see what you are saying, I will play with some crops and try to repost this again. This is sepia so I will try B&W as well, thanks for your suggestions!
narnold (Noah Arnold) said 2 months ago:
Amy and Mike: Thanks!!
Beamer: I see what you are saying, I will play with some crops and try to repost this again. This is sepia so I will try B&W as well, thanks for your suggestions!
boyd added a critique 2 months ago:
I agree with the above comments. I also like your use of dof here where you have resisted going too shallow, but have good depth through the length of the strings. The toning works well for me. Nicely done.
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 1 month ago:
Very pleasing
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i like the treatment of this!