Uploaded by bigoode - 5 comments - Topic: Weather (3 months ago)
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warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 3 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 3 months ago:
I wonder if this would be better in B&W, the yellow seems to distract me a bit. I think you need to somehow focus the interest more to the clouds and mountain in the background. I think the B&W would help if you included in the conversion a little more "punch" in the tonal range of the far part of the scene. I tried cropping the bottom just above the closest yellow post by scrolling the image. I seems to help a lot too.
juanantonio (J.A. Pellicer) added a critique 3 months ago:
Es cierto que esta composición podría admitir otros tratamientos, en mi opinión el utilizado por usted para este tema/topic ha sido muy interesante. La carretera flanqueada por los postes amarillos, coincido con Amy, conduce suavemente al espectador entre un paisaje con una gama tonal encantadora. Enhorabuena. Saludos
boyd added a critique 2 months ago:
I like the composition with the yellow markers, but I also agree with Clyde that these don't really help within this topic. A b&w conversion might do the trick, but you might also consider this in "roads" or some other topic.
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 2 months ago:
I think it fits into this category quite well.
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really like the composition of this with the road/yellow markers leading the eye