IMHO, to be an abstract the phisical form of the object is not captivating enough. The blue on the left also needs to be a little more sharp. Excuse me for expressing my frank thoughts!

Why do you have to excuse? I ask for oppinions and feedback doesn't need to be positive all the time.

This is my first attemt to make something abstract. Personally, I love the combination of the green and deep blue.

The composition you chose creates tension. You have a horizontal fame and a vertical subject. I normally like tension in an image, but this just doesn't quite work for me. I bet this would look a lot better and hold more mystery as a square composition. That would also loose the dark corner in the upper right that tends to spoil any flow the subtle shapes in the blue object creates.

I think if the foreground were a little sharper, you might have a stronger image - nice color combination.

Jon

Tamara, I agree with you that the play between the green and the blue is quite pleasing, but I think that the green is broken up a little too much by the light patches. That said, the blue area is really very interesting. Given the other comments, I think that this could be a really good subject to revisit and shoot lots of different frames to see how different compositions etc work.