Uploaded by charcoal - 4 comments - Topic: Reflections (3 months ago)
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Reflections (3 months ago)
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 3 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 3 months ago:
This image is "shouting" for a polarizing filter and some color balance work. The logo on the boat really needs to be in sharp focus and I would have painted out the tip of the strip just showing to the right of the logo.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 3 months ago:
I agree with Clyde. Additionally, the composition is too heavily weighted on the right side - unfortunately, what we find on the right side is not very interesting.
boyd added a critique 3 months ago:
I agree that it is an interesting angle, but doesn't quite deliver on this potential. Perhaps Clyde is correct and you could play with a polarizing filter to tone down the reflected light and allow you to bring the focus and flow back to where you want. I do, however, really like the way that you have captured the beach reflection in the dark section of hull and that it is gold like the stripe - nice.
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I like the angle from wich you shot this photo but the coastline is to light in comparing with the rest of the image... it's shouting for my attention - unjustified.